Reflection on Pitch
What I think went well in our pitch was the fact that we presented fairly confidently and articulated our ideas quite clearly. I think the majority of the feedback we received from the presenter of Sheffield Live's Soul Casino, 'Stevlor', was positive and constructive. Our presentation was aesthetically pleasing and had a fair balance between written information and visuals.
What we could have done to improve our pitch would have been to come across as if we had thorough and sound knowledge on the topics and genres covered by our ideas. To do this we should have alluded to more examples of local bands (for 'Sheffield Underground Sounds') such as Monoking, The Wired and The Bone Lab. The presenter also suggested that we make sure to brief the bands we interview beforehand and make sure we have some decent questions to ask them and that their answers are likely to be interesting. Examples of these questions include: What will you guys be getting up to after you've finished your tour? How does your City inspire you? Where is your favourite gig venue and why?
For our 'Local Voice' idea, we should have provided other examples of varied and interesting subject topics. After this feedback, we realised that 'Sheffield Underground Sounds' was our best idea, as I know a lot about the local music scene and could confidently talk about it live on-air, whereas I don't know a lot about social, ethical and political issues in the local area and therefore wouldn't be able to write the script for 'Local Voice', let alone present it. Another problem we found with 'Local Voice' would be our live phone ins, as they would be incredibly difficult to regulate and we could struggle with legal and ethical issues if any offensive language or opinions were shared with our listeners.
Overall I think our pitch was quite successful, the Sheffield Live presenter didn't really give us as much feedback as some of the other groups (I've interpreted this as a good sign that he thought our ideas were pretty sound instead of thinking they were a train-wreck not worth the breath) and I think he preferred our first idea, 'Sheffield Underground Sounds', which is great for me because I would be far more passionate about that as a product.
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