Peer Assessment

In today's lesson as a class we looked at one of my audio product analysis (Toby Foster at Breakfast) and suggested improvements for my work.

To improve my work I need to:
- Add more detail and use key words into my work
- Discuss specific examples 
- Go into more depth about the production processes 
- Use the words 'denotation' and 'connotation' in the meaning sections
- Add a little introduction before each analysis

Feedback from Miss Edwards: