LO4: Questionnaire & Peer Feedback from Mock Pitch

Questionnaire & Peer Feedback

The data from our questionnaire showed that more people preferred our “Sheffield Underground Sounds” idea because it would be interesting and there is a gap in the market for it. Our classmates thought that the most effective part of our pitch was the detail that we went into. The main criticism for our pitch was the way that our presentation was quite text heavy and it wasn’t always easy for people to read. Nearly everyone agreed that our audio clip was appropriate for our pitch. The majority of people said that we could improve our pitch by using less text on our presentation and more visuals.

In order to deliver a more successful pitch to Sheffield Live, we will consider the feedback from our peers by making our presentation more aesthetically pleasing by adding more pictures and summarising our text into easy to read bullet points.